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Re: The Imperial Era and the Tavishes (Score: 1) by Wolfsire on Wed, September 14, 2005 (User Info | Send a Message | Journal)
It sounds good to me. But to give you my thoughts on that in case you want to do some editing or spin-off articles, the tragedy does not come through that much, IMO, for TIII individually. I sympathized more with Luschan. If you wanted to do that, I would guess you could establish the appropriate level of sympathy in half a dozen sentences rather than by soliloquy. RIII has always been my favorite.
